Recent Animatic, Finished and wonderful for an animatic

So here it is, the long awaited animatic with wonderful backgrounds.

Please comment on this~! I need some good critique!

This is the last "new" animatic. The story isn't changing from here on out. I am proud of that, too. Obviously, I have some character clean up and re-fixing I need to do.

Looking forward to see what anyone has to say! :D